Life is very precious. Its a terrible thing to just up and throw away. Have you ever wondered why people act the way they act, or do the things they do? On February 13 2009 and officer was gunned down at Broad& Olney while on duty.
I think of my life as the four seasons of the year. I would have to say that I am in the Spring/Summer of my life. I am energetic. I have a little Trump in me. And I'm getting my education.
Its starts off with my energy. Me being the young stallion that I am lol... I go to the YMCA or just stay home and workout when I'm just being plain old lazy. Not wanting to travel.
I'm also bout this paper out hear. Being as though I'm young and my time period right now is about fashion, I want to get a job so that I can keep my closet up to date. I'm also following in the foot steps of my father trying to start my own business. Right now I would have to say that getting money isn't an option. You need money to do everything now and days. Nothing in this world is free.
The last thing that sums up my journey to summer would have to be my education.''A mind is a terrible thing to waste.'' I'm attending a college prep. school which is preparing me for the college life. I also go to summer/after school programs that are linked to colleges, that can open new doors to success. I mean being successful isn't going to come easy. You have to be determined and work hard and I am willing to do both of them.
So this is my season relation. I think that I fit the description pretty well. Do you agree?
Monday, February 23, 2009
Wednesday, February 11, 2009
We Real Cool (response)
We Real Cool/ Is it looking a certain way? Is it acting a certain way? Or is it just being fake? What the hell is it!!!! We Real Cool was a very connective poem. It had a lot of meaning. When I read this poem I began to think about stories that my pop used to tell me a few years back.
One of the things that I liked about this poem(We Real Cool) would have to be the title. I think that its important because it sets the mood of the poem. This poem , was based on two people or a group of people wanting or trying to be cool. This poem is an eye catcher because it says something about being cool. As you read this poem you will begin to see how this title is engaged with the poem.
In addition rhythm plays a major role in this poem as well. Without rhythm the poem just doesn't catch my eye. I really love poems that have rhythm so I would have to say that is why I chose this poem. Rhythm to me is important but its not supposed to be in every poem. I just really love poems with rhythm.
My last reason for liking this poem is imagery. This poem is a very expressive poem to me. Every other line seems to paint a different picture. A lot of them paint pictures that i really can relate to. This poem points out drinking, chilling, then dying. I mean come on doesn't it paint a picture to you.
This poem was all of that. This poem opens eyes to not only me but to people that can relate to this scenario as well. I reall like this poem. if I could rate this poem on a 1-10 i would give it a strong 9. Not because its good but everything isn't perfect there's probaly something that I'm missing that another person might catch. That can make a good suggestion about it.
One of the things that I liked about this poem(We Real Cool) would have to be the title. I think that its important because it sets the mood of the poem. This poem , was based on two people or a group of people wanting or trying to be cool. This poem is an eye catcher because it says something about being cool. As you read this poem you will begin to see how this title is engaged with the poem.
In addition rhythm plays a major role in this poem as well. Without rhythm the poem just doesn't catch my eye. I really love poems that have rhythm so I would have to say that is why I chose this poem. Rhythm to me is important but its not supposed to be in every poem. I just really love poems with rhythm.
My last reason for liking this poem is imagery. This poem is a very expressive poem to me. Every other line seems to paint a different picture. A lot of them paint pictures that i really can relate to. This poem points out drinking, chilling, then dying. I mean come on doesn't it paint a picture to you.
This poem was all of that. This poem opens eyes to not only me but to people that can relate to this scenario as well. I reall like this poem. if I could rate this poem on a 1-10 i would give it a strong 9. Not because its good but everything isn't perfect there's probaly something that I'm missing that another person might catch. That can make a good suggestion about it.
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